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I'm Sorry But Not Really by *Wombat-Pentagram:iconWombat-Pentagram:



So sorry, so sorry, I'm sorry my friend,
That the safe that I dropped caused your end,
That the weight it had was great,
And splattered you across the concrete slate.

It had been a long day,
And everyone had something negative to say.
The state of the safe was the last act,
That it caused your end was a sorry fact.

Dreams had shattered that very hour,
And I was drenched in raining shower,
And the dog I loved had been left to die,
Outside a vet's, I don't know why.

Questions of time
with no reason or rhyme
I cannot answer your whys
but to join your sorrowful and silent cries

Ahh philosophical questions will be there for me ,
As the blank grey walls of jail I see,
For negligence is criminal so they say,
But hell what would they have done if they had my day?
©2009-2010 *Wombat-Pentagram
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Author's Comments

Collaboration with the crazy Bunny. We had such lovely arguments over this.. but meh.. its all good for us crazies..

I solemnly give permission for everyone to get their poking sticks and go visit *EatingMyOwnFears! Go! Do it now!


hehe

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:iconlaxaria:
Whoo interesting poem. Complex and well composed.

Good job to the poet(s) involved! :D

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My Poems | 25 words of Inspiration | My Prose
:iconwombat-pentagram:
Thank you very much :) Me and Bunny always have fun creating collaborations :) hope you give her love as well.

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"to dream perchance to wake anew"...
:iconeatingmyownfears:
Thank you so much!! :love:

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Dear Peter,

I have penguins. I don't think you can get much cooler than that.

Kindly,
Antartica
:iconlaxaria:
I read another piece from Wombat yesterday.

Very good and well composed pieces. Great job!

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My Poems | 25 words of Inspiration | My Prose
:iconeatingmyownfears:
yeah, he's pretty cool :D

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Dear Peter,

I have penguins. I don't think you can get much cooler than that.

Kindly,
Antartica
:iconsweetblackrose13:
Heheheeh =D=D=D

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~Member of the 3eyes club! Inanely Inspired Insanity [link]~ =)

We picked strawberry peaches
where fields smelled like lemon.
:iconwombat-pentagram:
thanks :)

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"to dream perchance to wake anew"...
:icontwilightpoetess:
I like the rhyme scheme here, it works SO effectively with the subject. Nicely done, you two!

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I've always known that I'd be trapped;
the world outside no longer shows.
And here, within this dream, I'm caught...
the Lady of the Blackened Rose.


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:iconhillbillygirl:
This is just so awesome. I love it. Another perfect description of life. Awesome. :)

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